Through My Eyes Part 7 – Jamie’s Story

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I'd been waiting for the morning for so long that, I barely believed my eyes when I woke up to my window rattling. The ray of sunlight beamed through the gap through the window almost blinding me. After a few moments, I regained my vision and saw the local kids up to their usual disturbances as they went to school.

“Oi! If see you guys making trouble outside my window again I swear I’ll come after you.” I shouted out loud

“Shut up smelly haha,” A voice said whilst scampering away.

I wouldn’t let these kids get away with ruining what I’d been looking forward to for ages. Today I was going to fuck the life out of Whitney after putting in so much work for months. She has the whole package, pretty face, big breast and huge bum. She’s a good girl who knows what she wants, but I’m not looking to settle down anytime soon.

I decided to take a shower because I wanted to look fresh for this evening. I recently got them new showers, they’re voice command, but I don't want to chat with my shower. Give me Grime and running hot water, that's all I want. As the hot water beat against my skin and dropped by my side, my mind faded into dullness and everything became a foggy illusion. The sensation of the steamy water calms me; it takes my mind off things. Then again I can’t help but think about my life up until this point. Being kicked out my house, living on the streets and dad going jail is something not a lot of people can say they've come out of okay.

After coming out of the shower I made myself breakfast, but me being greedy I made too much for myself. My phone started to vibrate on the table, saw Dan’s name come up which reminded me of the nasty mess he left in the other room. I can’t believe he vomited, but at least, he lost his virginity. I waited a few minutes before I called him back.

“Yooo! Bro, it’s been like forever man what’s up?” I said

“Yeah I’m good. Did you get my message if so come by later tonight around 7/8pm.” He replied back, but he seemed annoyed over something.

“Why you talking like that you sound bare off bro! Anyway yeah, I’ll be kind of late just going to a girls house to do a few things.” I cheekily said. He knows me well enough to know what I was really going to do I didn’t have to say.

“Yeah do your thing, roll thafe (safe),” he answered back. I was so confused with that response because it really wasn’t him.

“Wait why are you talking like you have a lisp? Are you Fool? No, wait you’ve been watching that hood documentary thing I bet.” I laughed out loud.
“Yeah, it’s a bad habit now but yeah later tonight,” he said. The phone went silent immediately, which meant he had actually hung up on me. The little idiot didn’t even let me get to ask about Paige. I haven’t heard from her in ages and neither has her sister, which is very weird.

I chilled for the remainder of the afternoon, playing my PS4 and smoking my weed. I inhaled slowly; my system was responding to the smoke, it felt like a warm blanket was wrapping my lungs. Taking small, slow puffs I felt delighted, there really was no feeling like this well after I ejaculated.  

Unsurprisingly I lost track of time, it was now 5 pm and it was pitch black. I hated how during winter it got dark early, and because of the incident that happened during Dan’s 18th birthday, everything made me very paranoid. Anyway, that couldn’t hold me back, so I got ready to go to Whitney’s place.

The air was damp and cool smelling faintly of a car's exhaust fumes. My Area just didn’t smell good at all, thankfully Whitney lived close by so getting there wasn’t too much of an issue apart from the many lefts and right turns you had to take. As I was walking I heard rustling sounds coming from behind me but when I looked back nothing was there. Wasn’t sure if I was hearing things so just to be on the safe side I went and stood in a little gap that I saw ahead of me to see if anything comes out or moves.

Whilst I sank in the shadows, I heard numerous footsteps and voices coming along.

“I could have sworn I saw him, come this way.” A deep voice said whilst moving around from what I could hear. I tried to take a look, but I could hardly see a thing it was too dark.

That’s when I heard footsteps chaotically spaced from the last, no rhythm at all very close to where I was standing. Whoever it was lacked confidence, and is likely scared. I started walking backwards knowing that I had to get myself out there until I heard a voice say, “Don’t move!”

My heart was beating fast; I had no idea what was going to happen. From the way they approached me, I knew they were scared/nervous and probably didn’t want to be here so my first thought was to reason with them. With my back still faced to them I said, “Whatever they’ve told you to do, you don’t have to go through with it.” I said, in the hope they'd listen to me but things just didn’t go how I would have wanted it to.

“Marvin over here, I’ve found him!” he shouted out loud.

Without a moment to waste I turned around and punched the person in front of me but it was too late four other bodies had surrounded me with nowhere to run away to. Everyone was dressed in black with their hoods up so it was impossible to make out who was who until one of them unflinching, unblinking, came up to my face. A handkerchief mostly masked his face, but I could tell he was the leader of the group.

“Do you know how long I’ve fucking waited to catch you since that night you got away from us,” he said in a menacing voice whilst I watched on trying to piece together what I had gotten myself into. Then it hit me that he’s the guy that chased Dan and me in the car.

“Whatever she has told you, she’s-“

Before I could even finish my sentence I took a heavy punch to my stomach. I was gasping for air, I didn’t see it coming. I fell to my knees clutching my stomach.

“You fucking dickhead, I know everything. Don’t try and lie to my face, I know you fucked her.” He said assertively. I couldn’t even reply back to him I was in too much pain. All that was going through my head was that his girl had really lied about the whole situation. I didn’t know she had a man until he came back to her house one day; I had to jump through the back window to escape before he saw me. She wouldn’t even acknowledge what she done when I called her to get an explanation. So I cussed her out, so this is her revenge for that I guess…fucking bitch.

“You’re a dead man you know that right nigga! Remember this face because it’s the last face you’ll be seeing.” He said as he removed the handkerchief from around his face and revealing his face from underneath his hood. My eyes couldn’t open wide in enough to get a great look but I did see he had dreadlocks and his skin was black a night.

I began to receive vicious kicks by everyone around me. All I could do was cover my face in the hope it would all end soon. Until I felt something penetrating my flesh.

“Arghhhhhhhhh.” I cried out loud. Not knowing what exactly had just happened to me but I was in serious pain.

“Marvin! Fuck this wasn’t a part of the plan let’s get out of here now!” Somebody said in total shock. Sounds of footsteps running away into the night are all I heard, I was too scared to open my eyes and see what damage had actually been done to me.


I’m not sure how long I stayed on the ground floor, but the pain that once burned like a fire had faded away to an icy numbness. Suddenly it had become very hard for me to breathe. I then heard voices, it seemed like they were very concerned with what had happened to me. I could lip read and managed to make out the word stabbed. I managed to take a glimpse of the ground beside me only to see blood flowing from me. Flashes of my life just appeared in front me; this was it I started thinking. I’m really going to die right here and all because of a lying bitch of a female what a way to go out. Oh well, I still fucked her good.



BACK TO PRESENT DAY.....

“Yeah so that’s pretty much how it all happened Dan you happy now,” Jamie asked me sarcastically.

“Piss off man! Obviously, I’m not happy I know what happened now, but I’m full of rage at the same time.” I said trying to not let my anger spill out. If Jamie didn’t center his life around females this kind of shit wouldn’t be happening.

Later that evening Me, Jamie and Sarah decided to have a movie night at mine. Sarah was in shock even after Jamie had told her some of the details as to what had happened. She kept stopping the film to ask if he needed anything and if he was okay.

“Are you sure you’re alright Jamie,” She asked sincerely.

“I’m fine, you’re starting to sound like my mum,” Jamie said whilst trying to use my PlayStation 4 remote to restart the film again.

“Soo how’s your Boyfriend Sarah everything good!” I asked. I don’t know what came over me to ask her this especially because of what she told me about him, also the fact that Jamie doesn’t know that I know made things tenser.

“He’s fine thanks for asking!” She said back to me whilst lowering her said and fidgeting with her fingers.

Jamie didn’t make a sound or move an inch. His facial expression said it all, he didn’t expect me to know this, it was obvious. The room was silent for another couple minutes until a loud banging noise broke the silence.

“Saved by the bell! Well, banging noise.” Jamie said with relief on his face.

I didn’t get up to go see who it was until another banging noise, louder that the first one echoed through my room.

“Erm aren’t you going to see who that is mate?” Jamie asked

“Yeah go check it out, Dan,” Sarah said.

Reluctantly I got up to go check my front door. As I opened the door I saw Andrew the police officer that was talking to my mum at the station and two more police officers with him. I was confused as to why they were here.

“Hello! Is Jamie inside?” Andrew asked aggressively.

“Yeah you know he just got out of hospital today and is staying at mine,” I responded

Jamie popped out of nowhere with Sarah holding him upright. “What’s going on I heard my name.” Said Jamie.


“Jamie Sanderson you are hereby under arrest in connection to the murder of Paige Littles. You do not have to say anything, but it may harm your defence if you do not mention when questioned, something which you later rely on in court. Anything you do say may be given in evidence.” Andrew Stated vibrantly.

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